21 January 2013

Stuck Intro

Below here is the intro for the story I am writing. Any feedback will be helpful!


----Intro----

If he looked at the lights in a certain way he could just fool himself that it was all magic.

He liked the hill in the dark, living in a city with his head firmly stuck in a world of fantasy; the night was what merged the two together here on the hill. He liked to imagine the lights shining out to him were really fairies lighting the world for everyone.

When he told his best friend about it she just laughed. She had already given up dreaming. When it was no longer mandatory for her to read like it was at school, she hadn’t bothered to pick up a book.  All she seemed interested in was the newest gossip in her glossy girl’s magazine.

That was his problem; he was getting further away from all his friends. The older they got the more the magic seemed to drain from them, it all seemed like a silly childhood dream. The problem was it hadn’t stopped being reality for him yet.

He hadn’t bothered with college or university like them; he’d started working for a bookstore. It wasn’t that he had no ambitions, but what could be more magical then working with books?

He had been named after a character in his mothers favourite book, the character was a hero just not the typical muscle headed hero. For years he’d grown attached to that character. He had been raised with fantasy, listening to his mother read to him everything from books set in different lands to books set in space. It was the only thing his mother had done right.

He was a geek. His friends had grown up and left the world of fantasy behind embracing this new “grown up” world of relationships, fashion and meaningless celebrity gossip. He was left to himself to fashion a world of fantasy in his dreams, worlds with mountains to scale, deserts to trek across, monsters to fight against and maidens to be saved.

His name is Sam.

And he had no idea that all of his dreams were about to become true.


Quite literally.

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